A few people including some students from the year above viewed it and they all said that they really like it and gave me some pointers.
It was suggested that I remove certain shots including this one:
It reveals more information than is needed. But now it could be leading on to more action (which it would be, as it is an opening sequence). It poses certain enigma codes such as What Happened? What was on the other side of the door? Why did she scream?
I also had to juggle around the audio a bit after taking out this shot as the timings were slightly off. But, as this shot was fairly close to end it didn't matter too much and wasn't too hard to correct.
Next I will get some feedback from my target audience. I plan to show the sequence to a few people then ask them to fill in a questionnaire about it.
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