Audience feedback - first edit - Question 4 & 5

I was incredibly happy to see that the feedback was so positive as me and Arabella spent so long on it, perfecting it and really thinking about how it matches and enhances the action. From the comments given it is clear that I don't need to change the music.

"It was suitable and dramatic"
"It enhances the film"
and
"Build up the tension"


Are the characters what you would expect from a horror film?


Every single member of the audience I asked answered 'yes' to this question. This shows that I have managed to identify and follow the conventions of horror regarding characters. No changes needed to be made here.

Comments included:
"Yes - the girl suggests vulnerability"
"Pretty much - dim teen who backs themselves into the corner"