Audience feedback - first edit - Question 3

How could the titles be improved?

75% of people commented that they did not have any suggestions on how the titles could be improved, only 5 people had suggestions on how they could be improved. These were:

Make them Darker
Make them spookier
Continue using the typewriter
More stop motion
Make them larger

Seeing as the majority were happy with the titles Im not going to make any changes. Here is how I have justified the decisions.

Darker - I need them to stand out, if they were darker they may not show up
Spookier - I'm afraid this was a bit vague, I'm not sure how to make them 'spookier'. Also I like the subtlety, I don't want them to be to over the top.
Use the type writer/more stop motion - As these were part of my production cards and not the film I want to keep it separate rather than to continue these techniques through out. I am a big fan of stop motion and plan to use it more in future projects but due to its comic nature it isn't really appropriate for the horror genre.
Larger - The title of the film ('Bloody Nightmare') is larger than the names and it needs to be to show its importance and that it is different.


Comments included:
"I like them how they are"
"They were already good"
and
"Very good, I like the flashing of them"